Let me cut to the chase. I was three hours into a surveillance job last Tuesday - sitting in my truck outside a corporate office park, watching for a disgruntled former employee who'd made some threats. Boring work. The kind of assignment where you need something to keep your edge without distracting from the mirrors. Burning Bright turned out to be exactly the right kind of company.
Peter Ash is the real deal. And I don't say that lightly - I've tossed more military thrillers across the room than I care to count because the author clearly learned combat tactics from Call of Duty. But Nick Petrie gets it. Ash's claustrophobia - that buzzing, sparking sensation when the walls close in - that's not Hollywood PTSD. That's the real thing. The way it manifests in the dense redwood forest, how the fog triggers it, how he has to manage it while still functioning? I've known guys like this. Hell, some days I am this guy.
When a Bear Chases You Up a Tree
The opening sequence is something else. Ash encounters a grizzly in northern California - supposedly extinct in that region - and his tactical retreat up a sapling leads him to discover a woman hiding in the tree canopy via an elaborate rope system. I've been in some unusual situations during my deployments, but finding a fugitive journalist living in the redwood canopy while being hunted by armed men? That's a new one.
What I appreciated is how Petrie handles the transition from pure survival to investigation. June Cassidy isn't a damsel. She's a journalist who escaped her own kidnapping and is actively working the problem. The dynamic between her and Ash feels like two competent operators figuring out how to work together, not some forced romantic tension (though yeah, there's some of that too).
The Tech Angle That Doesn't Make You Roll Your Eyes
Here's where Burning Bright surprised me. The plot involves June's mother - a prominent software designer who died under suspicious circumstances - and some kind of technology that could "change the modern world forever." Usually when thrillers go the tech route, I'm bracing for nonsense. But Petrie keeps it grounded enough that my BS detector didn't go off. The shadowy pseudo-military organization hunting them feels authentic. These aren't cartoon villains. They're contractors. I've worked with guys like this. Some of them are good people doing questionable work. Some of them are bad people who found a legal outlet.
The eccentric recluse they encounter adds a nice wrinkle. Without spoiling it, there's a reason this technology matters, and the stakes feel earned rather than manufactured.
Mendel Behind the Mic
Stephen Mendel narrates, and he's solid. Consistent delivery, maintains the tension when it needs maintaining, keeps the fun parts fun. But - and this is the one knock - the pacing runs a beat slow. Not enough that I wanted to throw my phone, but enough that I noticed it during the quieter stretches. I bumped it to 1.25x about two hours in and that smoothed things out. Mendel's voice has the right gravitas for Ash, and he differentiates characters well enough that I never lost track of who was talking.
This is the second Peter Ash book after The Drifter, and Mendel carries the continuity well. If you're coming in fresh, you'll be fine - Petrie gives you enough context without drowning you in recap.
Who's This For (And Who Should Pass)
If you're looking for a military-adjacent thriller with a protagonist who actually acts like someone with combat experience? This delivers. If you want non-stop gunfights every chapter? You might get antsy during the investigation portions. The book balances action with puzzle-solving, and that pacing won't work for everyone.
Readers who get twitchy about violence and language - fair warning, both are present. Nothing gratuitous, but Petrie doesn't sanitize the rough edges either. Wife Between Us takes a completely different approach to suspenseβdomestic psychological tension instead of tactical operationsβbut both books understand that real danger doesn't need constant explosions to keep you locked in.
SITREP
Burning Bright does what a good thriller should do: it kept me alert during a boring stakeout without making me miss anything in my mirrors. Peter Ash joins a short list of fictional operators I'd actually trust in a real situation. The redwood canopy chase sequence alone is worth the listen - one of the most original action setups I've come across in years. Ranger perked up during that part, which is his version of a five-star review.
Worth your time? Affirmative. Just bump the speed a notch and let Petrie do his thing.













